Comments on: New Moon Unofficial Film Script — Shattered Pieces (Part 2)

By: twichy

twichy — Wed, 06 Oct 2010 08:18:01 +0000

I love this movie very much but I thought bella was going to end up being a vampire . .

By: taylorlautnerlover-hottie

taylorlautnerlover-hottie — Tue, 30 Mar 2010 00:08:12 +0000

what? jacobs notsupposed to be a werewolf and who are matt and hannah?!?

By: Vanessa

Vanessa — Wed, 22 Jul 2009 21:16:49 +0000

I like it but, then this isnt how the book goes. i want it exactly like the book.
But it seems better then the first book.

By: Reece

Reece — Tue, 26 May 2009 10:04:14 +0000

as much as i love your script….
I don’t think you should have Seth and Leah in there… because they don’t actually become wolves until Eclipse…

The only wolves you should have are the ones from the book…. don’t forget we can get familiar with Seth and Leah in the next movie…

By: Holmstead

Holmstead — Thu, 21 May 2009 15:07:44 +0000

This is the best site! got to read more

By: twilight

twilight — Fri, 15 May 2009 12:59:46 +0000

Thanks, Bobby. I’ll try to add a line saying they won’t go so that it’s clearer.

By: bobby

bobby — Fri, 15 May 2009 04:13:52 +0000

i have 1 more thing to help u out. when it’s talking about emmet following edward, isn’t emmet supposedly gone in Africa or is that in Eclipse.

By: bobby

bobby — Fri, 15 May 2009 04:01:15 +0000

dude this is awesome. i am a guy and i thnk this script is awesome. u should start writing ur version of the next one and then send it in. i just have one suggestion. when edward leaves, in the book it has like 4 pages of blanks where bella is like zoned out. for that i thnk that there should b 4 different black screens, each with the month printed. thats all. i luv the script. ny1 that doesn’t like it have watched a lot of bad movies.

By: twilightnewmoon--ADDICT.

twilightnewmoon--ADDICT. — Tue, 12 May 2009 06:43:24 +0000

WOW. totally awesome.. it’s so gorgeous. MY DREAM is only if i could play a role of bella or in any character(except the ones for boys).. wicked COOL.. love it..”,]

By: ashley

ashley — Sat, 09 May 2009 15:12:39 +0000

look at the movie as a MOVIE. not as an adaptation of the book.

By: PAIN

PAIN — Fri, 08 May 2009 03:14:35 +0000

The book didn’t go like this!!!!

By: britney

britney — Wed, 01 Apr 2009 03:48:15 +0000

this is so terrible i am glad it is not official

By: twilight

twilight — Sat, 28 Mar 2009 01:52:49 +0000

Well, this is part 2, so you have to go to part 3 for the motorcycle stuff, but, let me warn you, there are details that will probably distress you, so maybe you’d better consider stopping now. thank you

By: LILia

LILia — Fri, 27 Mar 2009 23:19:53 +0000

omg this is not how it supposed to go!!! this is so wrong… and where are the motocycles and bella and jacob being so tight…!!??

By: Kelsey

Kelsey — Tue, 24 Feb 2009 21:38:10 +0000

This is EXTREMELY good, but, in my taste, a bit rushed. But, it’s very good. I really like the way you’ve taken it, and the changes you have made.

By: Kasey

Kasey — Sun, 22 Feb 2009 11:01:21 +0000

i thought Jacob turned into a werewolf a lot later and before he does, he and Bella have a ‘realtionship’. Also in his process of becoming a werewolf, he leaves Bella alone and she has the same struggle again.

By: angel

angel — Thu, 19 Feb 2009 17:40:53 +0000

That’s cool:d
And Edward, by the way, you’re hot

By: twilight

twilight — Mon, 16 Feb 2009 02:22:23 +0000

No prob, Alisha, as long as it’s said civilly, I don’t mind. I think I’ll put in a descriptive collapse of Bella after the breakup scene just to make it clearer.

Thanks for the feedback. I hope you get to read the rest of the script.

By: Alisha

Alisha — Mon, 16 Feb 2009 00:58:03 +0000

It’s good, a little confusing, but good. If I were the director though, I wouldn’t use this script. I am not trying to be mean, just some advice.

Well, when Edward was leaving Bella on the other page, it kinda went by in a rush. And the way the wording was put together, it was like an, oh okay, response. Edward and Bella going out to the forest and Edward saying good-bye to her there is sorta a big part. It’s important because it could really show how much Bella really loves Edward because she helplessly tries to find him again. Then when she is lost and found by Sam seems like a good part to put in there.
But, above some of the confusion, it proves that a little editing could make it a really good and enjoyable script. Good Work.

By: twilight

twilight — Thu, 29 Jan 2009 00:22:06 +0000

Hi Sheryll. Thanks for reading. However, please note that this is NOT the Melissa Rosenberg script. It’s my unofficial version. My name is Lorna Lopez.

Regarding Leah, I’ve explained in the Notes at the end of this part:

The choice of wolves to be featured was largely dependent on Breaking Dawn. Since Seth and Leah Clearwater will become the pack members of Jacob, I thought it best to introduce their characters in New Moon so that they can already be familiar to the audience. Of course, Alpha Sam Uley is a must and Paul as well. Jared, Quil, Embry and any other members of the pack may be added, of course, but, the viewers’ attention should be focused on these five.

By: sheryll

sheryll — Wed, 28 Jan 2009 23:50:27 +0000

i thought leah wasn’t suppose to be in new moon? http://www.twilightlexiconblog.com/index.php/2009/01/13/vanessa-hudgensone-more-time-with-feeling/

By: twilight

twilight — Wed, 21 Jan 2009 14:22:08 +0000

Liz and Dom, thanks a lot!

Hi Hilda. I wrote all the scripts that you will find on this site. My name is Lorna Lopez. This is UNOFFICIAL, meaning it’s NOT the Melissa Rosenberg script. At the end of each part of the script, I’ve stated:

Lorna Lopez aka ATwilightKiss Notes This script version is my attempt to reconcile the literary world with the more visual medium of film. Just like in the Lord of the Rings, changes will be made to accommodate a driven story line, time constraints, and attention to character development.

Thank you.

By: Hilda

Hilda — Wed, 21 Jan 2009 14:00:44 +0000

if you don’t mind me asking,where are you getting these script pieces from???

By: liz

liz — Fri, 02 Jan 2009 23:03:55 +0000

with all the hype and complaints from readers about what is going to happen with the sequel…i think that this script is perfect and i can see why the changes need to be made. i love this script and i think it should be used

By: Dom

Dom — Tue, 30 Dec 2008 20:21:22 +0000

Awesome stuff Right here, I’m looking forward to seeing more, keep up the great work!