New Moon Unofficial Film Script — Shattered Pieces (Part 2)
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SEQ . EXT. Shot of Forks mountains and forest to suggest passage of time.
SEQ . EXT. Forest. Shot of running of what appears to be “human” legs, closely followed by the four-legged kind. More join the hunt until there are at least 5 wolves.
SEQ . EXT. La Push beach. The “human” legs run into the water. Wolf Jacob follows then halts abruptly, turns back, acknowledges the Alpha, and stands at his side. The whole pack stares out to the open sea where the silhouette of a strong swimmer is visible. The pack howls a warning for the intruder.
SEQ . EXT. Open sea. Edward Cullen is driving a powerful motorboat and approaching the harbor.
SEQ . INT. Bella’s Bedroom. Bella lies catatonic on her bed, hugging her torso, staring at nothing. Charlie and Dr. Gerandy talk in hushed whispers just outside her door.
CHARLIE
What’s wrong with her, doc? It’s been a week since Jacob Black found her in the forest. She doesn’t want to eat or sleep. I’m going crazy here. I don’t know what to do. Do we need to hospitalize her?DR. GERANDY
There’s nothing physically wrong with her. I think what she needs more is someone to talk to.
SEQ . INT. Bella’s Bedroom. Bella is talking to Renee on the mobile phone.
BELLA
I’m fine, Mom.RENEE
Are you eating? Sleeping well?BELLA
Yes, mom.RENEE
I really miss you.BELLA
Miss you too.RENEE
How about coming over to Jacksonville, sweetheart?BELLA
Sure, mom.RENEE
Well, actually, I didn’t mean just for a vacation. Charlie and I have been talking. We thought it would be best if you moved back in with me. Phil’s really excited to see you.BELLA
What?!! How dare you make a decision about my life? I’m eighteen, and I can choose what to do! It’s my life! You have no right! I want to stay here in Forks.
Bella cuts off the connection. Charlie knocks on the door. Bella flings it open.
Do you want me out of this house? Why didn’t you say anything? Just give me a little time to look for a place, and –
CHARLIE
Bells, Bells… You’ve got it all wrong. Of course, I want you to stay here. I was just worried that I can’t seem to help you. I just thought your mother can take better good care of you at this time.BELLA
I’m sorry, Dad. I know I’m being a pain right now.
Charlie awkwardly hugs Bella.
CHARLIE
I wish I can make the pain go away. It’s going to be okay, baby. You’ll be okay.
SEQ . INT. Biology Classroom. Bella automatically goes to the same table that she and Edward used to occupy. She pauses then deliberately sits somewhere else.
ERIC
Hey, Bella. That’s my spot.
Bella doesn’t move.
ERIC
It’s cool. I’ll just go and tell Mr. Molina we’re trading places. It’s okay. You’re still my home girl.
SEQ . EXT. School Hallway. Bell rings. Bella is the first out of the classroom as the hallway fills with students.
SEQ . EXT. School Parking Lot. Bella hurriedly boards her truck. Mike and Angela break away from the group and try to run after her.
ANGELA
Bella!MIKE
Bells! Wait up!
Jessica jealously pulls Mike back.
JESSICA
What are you doing? You’re making a spectacle of yourself.
Bella ignores them and drives away. Angela stares after her truck.
SEQ a. INT. Bella’s truck. She suddenly spies the new radio / CD player. She pulls over, and tries to remove it. In her attempts, she accidentally presses the play button. Edward’s lullaby fills the truck, which makes her even more frantic to rip out the radio / CD player.
EDWARD
(seated on passenger side) Bella, stop it. You’ll hurt yourself.
Bella pauses, and then continues trying to pull it before finally succeeding.
EDWARD
Love, your hands. You’re bleeding.
Bella reaches towards the passenger side.
EDWARD
No, Bella!
SEQ b. EXT Bella is alone in the truck, crying with her arms wrapped around her torso.
SEQ . EXT. Forest. Dream Sequence. Bella is running after Edward until the darkness engulfs her.
SEQ . INT. Bella’s Bedroom. Bella wakes up screaming. Charlie knocks and talks to her through thee door
CHARLIE
Bells, you okay, honey?
Bella opens the door.
BELLA
Sorry, dad. It was just a nightmare.CHARLIE
The same one?BELLA
Yeah.CHARLIE
Bella. When your mom and I divorced, I went to– uhm, you know. A shrink.BELLA
(reluctantly) I’ll check out the school’s guidance counselor tomorrow after my last class.
SEQ . INT. English classroom.
MR. BERTY
Even better than seeing Shakespeare being performed is performing it yourselves.JESSICA
You mean the guys have to wear tights?!? Oohhh… Nice.
The whole class laughs and jeers. The boys tease and taunt each other.
MR. BERTY
(shakes his head) No need. We can make a modern version of Romeo and Juliet with everybody in jeans and shirts. We’ll study it in class first.
SEQ . EXT. School grounds. Baseball class.
COACH
Bella, don’t hit the ball, okay? Bella, did you hear me?
Bella nods.
COACH
(to the pitcher) Let’s just go for a walk. (under his breath) For safety’s sake.
Bella stands still as the ball passes her. Bella has a flashback of Edward and she driving to the baseball field, Edward fixing the cap on her hair, laughing, etc. During the fourth pitch, she remembers James and his hunt. She accidentally drops the bat on the catcher’s head.
MIKE
OW!BELLA
I’m sorry.MIKE
It’s okay. I’m okay!
SEQ . INT. Guidance Counselor’s Office.
COUNSELOR
So, Bella, how did your day go? Is there anything you wanted to talk about?BELLA
Is it normal to have, uhm, hallucinations? I think there’s something wrong with my brain.COUNSELOR
Well, it’s very normal to daydream. What do you mean by hallucinations? Would you like to tell me what you saw?
Bella remains silent.
COUNSELOR
That’s alright, dear. When you’re ready.
SEQ a. EXT. Forest campsite.
HANNAH
Matt, are you sure you cleaned the pans? If a bear smells them…MATT
Yeah, yeah. Hannah, it’s not exactly my first time, you know.HANNAH
Sorry, there has just been a lot of talk lately about giant grizzly sightings. It’s making me jumpy.MATT
(teases) And, just like it says in the ‘Top 10 Things to Do to Avoid Bear Attacks,’ I will now go 200 yards away from the campsite to hang the food and pans on a tree.HANNAH
I’ll go with you.MATT
Don’t be silly. I’ll be back in a sec.HANNAH
Hurry back, okay?MATT
(soothingly) I’ll whistle so you’ll know where I am.
SEQ b. EXT. Forest. An indeterminate shadow is stalking Matt. The shadow attacks. The whistling abruptly stops.
SEQ c. EXT. Forest campsite.
HANNAH
Matt? Matt? That’s not funny!
Hannah hears rustling and assumes it’s Matt coming back.
HANNAH
I hate you. Don’t do that e —
Hannah screams as she is attacked as well.
SEQ . INT. Bella’s Bedroom. Bella wakes up screaming. Charlie knocks.
BELLA
I’m okay, dad.CHARLIE
(through the door) You sure?BELLA
(sharply) I said I’m okay! Sorry, dad.
SEQ . EXT. Forest in autumn. Leaves falling from the trees to indicate change of season.
SEQ . EXT. Forest. Wolf Jacob is in pursuit of a vampire. A babble of wolf voices can be heard.
WOLF PAUL
Get that bloodsucker!WOLF SETH
Careful, Jake!WOLF LEAH
We’re right behind you.WOLF SAM
Close in fast and corner him.
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December 31st, 2008 at 4:21 am
Awesome stuff Right here, I’m looking forward to seeing more, keep up the great work!
January 3rd, 2009 at 7:03 am
with all the hype and complaints from readers about what is going to happen with the sequel…i think that this script is perfect and i can see why the changes need to be made. i love this script and i think it should be used
January 21st, 2009 at 10:00 pm
if you don’t mind me asking,where are you getting these script pieces from???
January 21st, 2009 at 10:22 pm
Liz and Dom, thanks a lot!
Hi Hilda. I wrote all the scripts that you will find on this site. My name is Lorna Lopez. This is UNOFFICIAL, meaning it’s NOT the Melissa Rosenberg script. At the end of each part of the script, I’ve stated:
Lorna Lopez aka ATwilightKiss Notes This script version is my attempt to reconcile the literary world with the more visual medium of film. Just like in the Lord of the Rings, changes will be made to accommodate a driven story line, time constraints, and attention to character development.
Thank you.
January 29th, 2009 at 7:50 am
i thought leah wasn’t suppose to be in new moon? http://www.twilightlexiconblog.com/index.php/2009/01/13/vanessa-hudgensone-more-time-with-feeling/
January 29th, 2009 at 8:22 am
Hi Sheryll. Thanks for reading. However, please note that this is NOT the Melissa Rosenberg script. It’s my unofficial version. My name is Lorna Lopez.
Regarding Leah, I’ve explained in the Notes at the end of this part:
The choice of wolves to be featured was largely dependent on Breaking Dawn. Since Seth and Leah Clearwater will become the pack members of Jacob, I thought it best to introduce their characters in New Moon so that they can already be familiar to the audience. Of course, Alpha Sam Uley is a must and Paul as well. Jared, Quil, Embry and any other members of the pack may be added, of course, but, the viewers’ attention should be focused on these five.
February 16th, 2009 at 8:58 am
It’s good, a little confusing, but good. If I were the director though, I wouldn’t use this script. I am not trying to be mean, just some advice.
Well, when Edward was leaving Bella on the other page, it kinda went by in a rush. And the way the wording was put together, it was like an, oh okay, response. Edward and Bella going out to the forest and Edward saying good-bye to her there is sorta a big part. It’s important because it could really show how much Bella really loves Edward because she helplessly tries to find him again. Then when she is lost and found by Sam seems like a good part to put in there.
But, above some of the confusion, it proves that a little editing could make it a really good and enjoyable script. Good Work.
February 16th, 2009 at 10:22 am
No prob, Alisha, as long as it’s said civilly, I don’t mind. I think I’ll put in a descriptive collapse of Bella after the breakup scene just to make it clearer.
Thanks for the feedback. I hope you get to read the rest of the script.
February 20th, 2009 at 1:40 am
That’s cool:d
And Edward, by the way, you’re hot
February 22nd, 2009 at 7:01 pm
i thought Jacob turned into a werewolf a lot later and before he does, he and Bella have a ‘realtionship’. Also in his process of becoming a werewolf, he leaves Bella alone and she has the same struggle again.
February 25th, 2009 at 5:38 am
This is EXTREMELY good, but, in my taste, a bit rushed. But, it’s very good. I really like the way you’ve taken it, and the changes you have made.
March 28th, 2009 at 7:19 am
omg this is not how it supposed to go!!! this is so wrong… and where are the motocycles and bella and jacob being so tight…!!??
March 28th, 2009 at 9:52 am
Well, this is part 2, so you have to go to part 3 for the motorcycle stuff, but, let me warn you, there are details that will probably distress you, so maybe you’d better consider stopping now. thank you
April 1st, 2009 at 11:48 am
this is so terrible i am glad it is not official
May 8th, 2009 at 11:14 am
The book didn’t go like this!!!!
May 9th, 2009 at 11:12 pm
look at the movie as a MOVIE. not as an adaptation of the book.
May 12th, 2009 at 2:43 pm
WOW. totally awesome.. it’s so gorgeous. MY DREAM is only if i could play a role of bella or in any character(except the ones for boys).. wicked COOL.. love it..”,]
May 15th, 2009 at 12:01 pm
dude this is awesome. i am a guy and i thnk this script is awesome. u should start writing ur version of the next one and then send it in. i just have one suggestion. when edward leaves, in the book it has like 4 pages of blanks where bella is like zoned out. for that i thnk that there should b 4 different black screens, each with the month printed. thats all. i luv the script. ny1 that doesn’t like it have watched a lot of bad movies.
May 15th, 2009 at 12:13 pm
i have 1 more thing to help u out. when it’s talking about emmet following edward, isn’t emmet supposedly gone in Africa or is that in Eclipse.
May 15th, 2009 at 8:59 pm
Thanks, Bobby. I’ll try to add a line saying they won’t go so that it’s clearer.
May 21st, 2009 at 11:07 pm
This is the best site! got to read more
May 26th, 2009 at 6:04 pm
as much as i love your script….
I don’t think you should have Seth and Leah in there… because they don’t actually become wolves until Eclipse…
The only wolves you should have are the ones from the book…. don’t forget we can get familiar with Seth and Leah in the next movie…
July 23rd, 2009 at 5:16 am
I like it but, then this isnt how the book goes. i want it exactly like the book.
But it seems better then the first book.