Comments on: New Moon Unofficial Film Script — Romeo Must Not Die (Part 4)

By: The Vamire Lizzy Christ

The Vamire Lizzy Christ — Thu, 28 Jan 2010 03:47:30 +0000

Not bad, I believe your dialogue is actually better than the Twilight Movie dialogue. A little more grown up actually!
The Vampire Lizzy Christ
(Yes I am a real Vampire)

By: Nikole

Nikole — Thu, 26 Nov 2009 04:01:53 +0000

wow this is amazing…i was just wondering in another chanpter could you maybe put more of jacob in it (:

By: Elenor

Elenor — Wed, 11 Nov 2009 19:52:37 +0000

Wow, this is really great. Better than original script. I love the idea of Jasper being in Volterra. It would be so perfect if this was the real screenplay… But still I am happy enough I´ve read it. I can always imagine it…
Thank you very much, this is really worth reading!

By: Melinda

Melinda — Mon, 12 Oct 2009 05:51:55 +0000

This was amazing! I didn’t intend on reading the whole thing. I was just checking it out for a second…then I found myself reading every line, and I might add that you kept me at the edge of my seat!! Bravo!! Thank you so much for taking the time to post this. Keep up the good work

By: lauren

lauren — Sat, 03 Oct 2009 00:05:23 +0000

i loveed it i couldnt stop reading it was different, but a good different keep up the good work=] i hope you make more scripts i would be delighted to read them. thankz

By: lauren

lauren — Sat, 03 Oct 2009 00:03:41 +0000

i loveed it i couldnt stop reading it was different, but a good different keep up the good work=] i hope you make more scripts i would be delighted to read them.

By: Kstewfan4eva

Kstewfan4eva — Sat, 12 Sep 2009 13:36:56 +0000

That wuz effin awesome lorna!!!!!!!! You are a very talented writer who shuld write a book!!!!! Just fantatstic!!! I love how u have jasper go to Voltera to protect Alice!!!!!!! So sweet and cute!!

By: twilight

twilight — Sun, 30 Aug 2009 11:40:00 +0000

Thank you very much for the appreciative words, Foxxx Talltrees!

By: Foxxx Talltrees

Foxxx Talltrees — Sun, 30 Aug 2009 07:34:54 +0000

Brilliant!! I loved it more than the book (my fav-mainly b/c of the wolves).I only didn’t want her to kiss Jacob b/c it changes the dynamic of book 3, otherwise it was awesome. Romantic & exciting. I loved that u had Victoria kill Harry Clearwater. It really allows the wolves involvement to be more appreciated. You are really talented. Hope your efforts get recognized by the right people.

By: NewMOONfan!

NewMOONfan! — Fri, 28 Aug 2009 18:31:02 +0000

This is all made up, most of the lines were just copied frm the book, and other were just made up! This is not even the real script! This is a lie! This is sooooo not the script for New Moon!! :@

By: twilight

twilight — Mon, 20 Jul 2009 04:55:41 +0000

Thank you, karim! Please keep the real script secret…

By: karim

karim — Sun, 19 Jul 2009 22:21:58 +0000

Love the script! It helps to calm the edge of waitting for the movie to be released. I read the other posts, and I don’t know if you’re aware, but a script of new moon was leacked on twitter and even though the site removed it, it was too little too late. I know of like 50 different pages where you can find the script. No one knows if it’s the real deal, but many, including me, believe it is because of it’s lenght and the fact that they tried to contain the leak as soon as they became aware of it.

By: Courtney

Courtney — Wed, 08 Jul 2009 08:55:09 +0000

Aw!
I think Edward & Bella should have kissed when it said “For never was a story of more woe
Than this of Juliet and her Romeo.”
:’]

By: twilight

twilight — Sun, 05 Jul 2009 09:41:59 +0000

Thank you very much Team Edward!

By: Team Edward

Team Edward — Sun, 05 Jul 2009 09:13:14 +0000

Wow that was brilliant, even better than the book in my opinion. You showed more Edward when he wasent with Bella which was fantastic and you get to see the realationship between Emmet and Rosalie. Truly you should right your own books becaus ethis was way more interesting and exciting.

Well Done,

There is definetly a carrer in writing for u!

Team Edwardxxxx

By: Crazed twilight fan

Crazed twilight fan — Wed, 01 Jul 2009 03:29:26 +0000

WOW!!!!!! You have got TALENT!!! I’m going to TRY to drop links at popular websites to get people to look at this! And HOPEFULLY kristin,rob, or the director for new moon will see it and put your ideas into the movie!!!!!!!!

By: Edward Obsessed

Edward Obsessed — Fri, 26 Jun 2009 00:46:59 +0000

Hi,
I forgot to ask, but who the heck is Mark?
Wasnt jessica dating Mike? And then TONS of times it says someone named mark.

By: twilight

twilight — Sun, 21 Jun 2009 14:44:23 +0000

Thanks, Jen! Roughly it took me about six weeks to finish the New Moon script, if I remember correctly… Not too sure anymore… But there was a lot of conceptualizing and outlining before the actual writing… That took just as long if not longer…

By: Jen

Jen — Sun, 21 Jun 2009 14:22:19 +0000

very interesting adaptation on the book/movie…this must have taken you awhile to make up!

By: twilight

twilight — Thu, 18 Jun 2009 20:55:45 +0000

No need to feel bad, Kelsey. It’s NOT the film script. That is truly confidential!

By: kelsey

kelsey — Thu, 18 Jun 2009 20:50:51 +0000

This wasn’t the real script was it? I feeel super bad for reading it now…. lol

By: katelyn

katelyn — Wed, 17 Jun 2009 21:01:29 +0000

That was great!! I loved the adding jasper . If the movie script is anything like that,it’ll be a great movie!!!

By: John

John — Wed, 17 Jun 2009 17:27:49 +0000

I think that you have some great ideas and that your script was brilliant.The only 2 things are that the marriage detail doesn’t really happen till eclipse and that the scimitars wouldn’t have been able to even scratch a vampire’s skin.
(The only thing that can tear a vampire’s skin is a vampire’s or werewolfs’s teeth.)

By: twilight

twilight — Mon, 15 Jun 2009 19:39:39 +0000

Thanks so much, Ismary1216 edward’s lvr!

By: Ismary1216 edward's lvr

Ismary1216 edward's lvr — Mon, 15 Jun 2009 19:36:31 +0000

response to- Twi-lover’s comment on edward’s marrige proposal in new moon/eclipse

well, yes, edward does propose to bella in eclipse, but if i may recall, in New Moon after the voting part happened, edward said
“If you could have anything in the world, anything at all, what would it be?”
bella says you then edward says something she doesnt have then bella says
“I wish it weren’t calisle that had to change me i wish it would be you.”
so then edward and bella begin to negotiate this and at last edward says
“Well, if you want me to be the one, you’ll have to meet my condition.”
“What condition?” bella asks
“Marry me first.”
and then bella thinks its a joke while she’s ‘wounding his ego’
so, get it?
i might not have done the conversation perfecty because i did it out of my head