New Moon Unofficial Film Script — Romeo Must Not Die (Part 4)
SEQ. EXT. Swan Porch. Late evening. Charlie snatches a sleeping Bella from Edward’s arms.
CHARLIE
Give her to me! Get out of here or I’ll arrest you for trespassing!
Charlie slams the door in Edward’s face. Edward goes down the steps.
EDWARD
Consider us reminded of the treaty. And we’ve found no trace of Victoria on our side of the line — have you?
Jacob comes out from the trees, but, maintains his distance.
JACOB
No. She bailed when she caught your little female’s scent. She hasn’t come near our lands since.EDWARD
When she comes back, she’s not your problem anymore. We’ll –JACOB
She killed one of our people! She’s ours!
Edward is quiet for a moment.
EDWARD
Thank you. I will never be able to tell you how grateful I am for keeping Bella alive. I will owe you for the rest of my…existence.
Jacob gives him a mental picture of Bella’s state while he was gone, all the dangers she went through and their special moments together, including the tender embrace and kiss Bella gives him before she goes away with Alice.
EDWARD
I’m a quick learner, Jacob Black, and I don’t make the same mistake twice. I’m here until she orders me away.CHARLIE
(shouting from inside the house) I’m coming out with my shotgun if I don’t hear that car of yours moving away from my house!EDWARD
May the best man win.JACOB
May the best human win.EDWARD
Touche.CHARLIE
I’M WAITING!
Sound effect of a shotgun being cocked.
SEQ. INT School stage. The Capulets and the Montagues are engaged in a sword fight. Angela, who’s playing the ruler of the land, enters to stop the brawl. Edward, who’s embracing Bella from behind, watches the play from the wings.
ANGELA / PRINCE
Put up your swords; you know not what you do.BELLA
I’m not marrying you, you know.EDWARD
Ouch. You wound me.ANGELA / PRINCE
Once more, on pain of death, all men depart.BELLA
Why can’t –EDWARD
Oops. Cue for swords…
Edward flits to where the actors are exiting so that he can get the swords. Bella looks at him in consternation. Edward winks at her, puts away the props and returns to her.
BELLA
Isn’t that dangerous? Someone might see you.EDWARD
The darkness blinds their eyes.
SEQ. INT. School stage. The play has progressed to the famous Romeo and Juliet Balcony Scene. Bella and Edward are watching from the wings. Bella is distracted because Edward is kissing her on the forehead, hair, tip of the nose, etc. (but not the lips).
JESSICA / JULIET
What satisfaction canst thou have to-night?EDWARD / MARK / ROMEO
The exchange of thy love’s faithful vow for mine.EDWARD
Yes?BELLA
No.
To persuade her, Edward resumes kissing her.
EDWARD
How long can you resist? You’re a teenager with raging hormones.BELLA
I am not!
Bella proves him correct by searching for more kisses. Edward chuckles in amusement.
EDWARD
Excuse me, my love. The balcony awaits.
Edward rushes off to exit the balcony set.
SEQ. INT. School stage catwalk (walkway in the flies above a theater stage). Bella is kissing Edward’s jaw, etc. When she tries to kiss him on the lips, he puts a finger on her lips to stop her. Onstage, Romeo and Juliet’s kissing is halted by the priest.
EDWARD / ERIC / FRIAR LAURENCE
For, by your leaves, you shall not stay alone
Till holy church incorporate two in one.EDWARD
Yes?BELLA
No. Edward, please…EDWARD
All you need to do is say yes. Yes?
Mutinously, Bella turns away. Edward hauls her to his lap. Bella doesn’t protest.
BELLA
So where were you these past eight months?EDWARD
Tracking Victoria, which I’m very poor at. She led me all the way to South America. And then doubled back to Forks. I never even realized it. But, don’t be afraid. Victoria is going to die. Soon.BELLA
So you were nowhere near Forks?EDWARD
Bella, do you honestly think I would have been able to stay away if I had known Victoria and Laurent were stalking you? I would have been back within 24 hours, if that were the case.BELLA
It’s just that I kept seeing you.
Edward caresses Bella’s face.
EDWARD
I have wished so many times for sleep to claim me so that I may dream of you. Of you and I together.BELLA
That’s not what I meant. You see, whenever I was in danger…I could remember you more clearly. Just as if you were standing right next to me. And, well, I wonder if the reason I could see and hear you so well was, because, underneath it all, I always knew that you hadn’t stopped loving me.
Edward embraces Bella.
EDWARD
My sweet. You will never be in any danger again. I swear. I only left because I wanted you to have a chance at a normal, happy, human life. I’ll never be strong enough to leave again. What I want and need is to be with you. I cannot exist without you.
SEQ. INT. School stage catwalk. As she remembers what happened in Volterra, Bella, with tears in her eyes, watches the deaths of Juliet and Romeo. Edward kisses her tears away to comfort her.
SEQ a. INT. School stage. Romeo drinks the poison.
MARK / ROMEO
O true apothecary!
Romeo dies beside Juliet.
SEQ b. INT. School stage. Juliet plunges the dagger into her breast.
JESSICA / JULIET
O happy dagger!
Juliet slumps near Romeo.
SEQ c. INT. School stage. The Capulets and the Montagues surround the dead young lovers.
ANGELA / PRINCE
For never was a story of more woe
Than this of Juliet and her Romeo.
SEQ. INT. School stage catwalk. Edward flits to the side and returns immediately with a large bouquet of ruffled tulips (the same flower on the New Moon book cover). Edward gestures to the red and white flower.
EDWARD
Red tulips mean true love.BELLA
You love me.EDWARD
Truly, I do. White tulips mean forgiveness. Can you ever forgive me, Bella? I was so stupid to think…
Bella pulls out a ruffled tulip and gives it to him.
EDWARD
I’m so unworthy of your forgiveness.
Edward kisses the inside of her wrist.
BELLA
You have forever to make up for it.
Finally, Edward kisses Bella on the lips. One of his hands releases the nets of tulip petals on the bowing cast. The cast looks up in pleased surprise, but do not see the lovers on the catwalk.
To read Part 3 — Close to Home, please click here.
To read Part 2 — Shattered Pieces, please click here.
To read Part 1 — Severed Ties, please click here.
Lorna Lopez aka ATwilightKiss Notes This script version is my attempt to reconcile the literary world with the more visual medium of film. Just like in the Lord of the Rings, changes will be made to accommodate a driven story line, time constraints, and attention to character development.
The Wife of Marcus The story of Marcus and his wife, Didyme, is written on Stephenie Meyer’s site.
Jasper Hale I included Jasper in the Volterra scenes to strengthen the true love theme; plus, since he can basically read Alice, I thought it would be more logical for him to know that she is lying. As Stephenie Meyer described their relationship in Midnight Sun, Chapter 1, First Sight, “[It] was Alice and Jasper who knew each other’s mood as well as their own. As if they could read minds, too– only just each other’s.”
Once he learns that Bella and Alice are going to Italy, he informs Carlisle that he’s going too. Although Esme tries to persuade him otherwise, Jasper would not be dissuaded. When he talks to Alice on the phone, he is already in Italy, albeit a little bit behind them. He arrives in Volterra just as the trio is trying to escape from the Volturi guard and follows them down into the subterranean tunnels.
And, since Jasper tried to kill Bella in the beginning of the film, I thought it would be fitting to have his character be part of the attempt to save her life in the end.
The Futility of Hiding Bella Edward’s plan of hiding Bella from the Volturi, as he proposed during the Vote chapter in New Moon, is played out in this unofficial script when they were attempting to escape.
Although Bella may not be found by Demetri, the others can be; and, owing to Bella’s nature of self-sacrifice, will likely cause any endeavor to hide her to be futile. Her nature to be responsible also had her removing Jacob’s jacket before going back to surrender to the Volturi to ensure that the werewolves’ existence remains a secret.
Alec Alec’s powers have been described by Edward in the Happily Ever After chapter in Breaking Dawn as “[cutting] off all sense and feeling” so that “no one can run when the verdict is given.”
I added control to Alec’s talent by enabling him to choose which senses to affect, thus, Aro can direct him to leave the sight and hearing of Edward and Jasper intact while they are immobile.
Scimitars In Stephenie Meyer’s world, only vampire, werewolf and shape shifter wolf teeth have proven to be effective against the vampires’ stone hard skin. I have added the feature of scimitars as a “technological” advancement by the Volturi to further enhance their reputation as the “guardians” of the vampire race. In their three thousand years of existence, it seems logical for the Volturi to have experimented and found a way to create the scimitars made out of vampire and werewolf teeth.
Ruffled Tulips Although ruffled tulips did not yield a specific meaning, the colors of red or white tulips did, “The meaning of tulips is generally perfect love. Like many flowers, different colors of tulips also often carry their own significance. Red tulips are most strongly associated with true love. White tulips are used to claim worthiness or to send a message of forgiveness.”
Although this script is based on the Twilight saga, it will be faithful to the spirit of the books, but, not necessarily be faithful in every way as to how it’s presented in the books per se.
Thanks to the Lord of the Rings Team Once again, I am thankful to Peter Jackson, Fran Walsh and Philippa Boyens, the Lord of the Rings scriptwriting team, for their commentary on the extended DVDs; because, aside from their passion and commitment to being faithful to the books, they were also driven to push the story forward for the film medium.
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January 22nd, 2009 at 2:48 am
Well done! It will be fun to compare your’s to the finished product. I think it’s an interesting treatment as a whole. I can’t complain about having more Jasper. Did I miss Victoria in the end with the exception of E and J alluding to her? I need to go back and read again.
I heard tales of a late rewrite by Melissa. May be she’s seen this one, eh? LOL…
I’ve linked in my blog like the other parts–links only.
January 22nd, 2009 at 7:17 am
Thanks, Shannon! I love the Alice — Jasper tandem, and I also gave emphasis to the Rosalie — Emmett union for the true love theme.
Re Victoria, she ran off when she heard Jacob coming up the cliffs, but, when she caught the unexpected scent of Alice, she decided to cut her losses for the moment. So, yes, she’s only mentioned by Edward and Jasper in the end.
Thanks for the links!
January 29th, 2009 at 2:21 am
This is wonderful! I started reading it when you only had one part up on the web and I came back and read the finished script. This is great and I like how you added some parts, that weren’t necessarily written in the book, to enhance some of the characters bonds. Well done!
January 29th, 2009 at 2:45 am
Wow! That’s a lot of reading, Amanda. Thanks for coming back and checking out the rest of the script. Thanks for appreciating the new scenes, and thank you for the kind words.
January 29th, 2009 at 8:41 am
cute script!!! totally enjoyed watching it. i hope that the movie is similar to yours! =)
i hope you do eclipse and breaking dawn…
January 29th, 2009 at 10:01 am
Thanks, Sheryll. I just finished reading Eclipse again in preparation to writing the script. I’ll finish till Breaking Dawn.
No promises as to when though. Thanks for understanding. 
February 3rd, 2009 at 4:51 am
You know where I can get the official script for New Moon?
February 3rd, 2009 at 6:29 am
Please, I want this so much.
Thanks
February 3rd, 2009 at 7:33 am
Hi Joanna. I’m sorry but I have no access to the Melissa Rosenberg script. And, I think someone would lose his job if that script ever got leaked out. Thanks for understanding.
February 3rd, 2009 at 8:01 am
ahhh, it’s ok
thanks anyway
February 3rd, 2009 at 8:06 am
But you have some idea if it will look like yours?
Sorry for being hamper
February 3rd, 2009 at 8:29 am
Hi Joanna. Let me just clarify that, as stated above, “The Twilight saga is owned and created by Stephenie Meyer, Little, Brown and Company and Summit Entertainment. This site and its content are in no way affiliated or associated with and/or or it’s respective companies.”
Having said that, let me just share a couple of facts. In a recent Melissa Rosenberg interview, she has said, “But at the moment, the part of Leah doesn’t happen until the third movie.”
Leah Clearwater appears in this unofficial script.
Aside from that, I’m sure there are more differences. Like, I’m guessing that since Jackson Rathbone, who plays Jasper, is shooting The Last Airbender this year, he’s probably not included in the Volturi scenes, but, he is in this unofficial version.
My guess is the similarity will be the device to bring Edward as a visual instead of an audio hallucination.
One of my objectives in writing the script is expanding the mind set of the Twilighters regarding the realm of possibilities that can be done for the film medium. Thanks for understanding.
February 4th, 2009 at 7:41 am
Thank you
February 8th, 2009 at 11:56 am
That was sooooo good (I cried a little), some of my favorite parts were cut out but you did a good job. Thanks!
February 8th, 2009 at 11:29 pm
Oh, I’m sorry you cried, but, I’m also glad you got affected. Thanks so much for reading the script!
February 10th, 2009 at 5:41 am
this script is not like the book at all. i dont like it
February 10th, 2009 at 12:55 pm
Yes, it is not like the book at all. As I wrote in my notes above:
This script version is my attempt to reconcile the literary world with the more visual medium of film. Just like in the Lord of the Rings, changes will be made to accommodate a driven story line, time constraints, and attention to character development.
Although this script is based on the Twilight saga, it will be faithful to the spirit of the books, but, not necessarily be faithful in every way as to how it’s presented in the books per se.
Thank you for reading.
February 13th, 2009 at 1:49 am
its so good i watched twilight a lot but the sixth part …it’s so sad
February 19th, 2009 at 10:09 am
i think Rob should pull some strings and get his sis lizzy pattinson on the soundtrack for her song — cold as ice—- listen to it on her myspace page , its pretty good.
February 19th, 2009 at 9:26 pm
Hi Melissa. That sounds cool. Can you please go to this post:
Request for a Robert Pattinson — Kristen Stewart Duet in the New Moon Soundtrack
And then can you please leave a link to the MySpace site of Lizzy Pattinson ?
Thanks!
April 6th, 2009 at 5:20 am
i like it but the ONE i didn’T like is The kiss with jacob cause she DIDN’T kiss him at all!
this script is good but i hate the kissing with jacob!
April 11th, 2009 at 10:16 am
she actually does kiss him just not in the second book O_o i think it adds some flavor… it’s funny when alice comes back and is like “JESUS CHRIST BELLA LETS GOOOO!” or something along that tenor of thought ;]
April 11th, 2009 at 10:22 am
Thanks for appreciating the changes, Kendall!
April 16th, 2009 at 11:06 pm
wow!superb!i haven’t read the books yet coz am waiting for RPatzz and KStew to become a couple before i’ll read the books.he,he(lol) but i really love what you are writing here.it’s great!more!more!
April 24th, 2009 at 2:46 pm
Hey,i loved that script i always day dreamed that they will always get to the part were they get married(Edward and Bella)i must thank JESUS,
Oh well i love you guys yous rock my heart every step of the way cant wait for the movie to come out love yous guys
April 24th, 2009 at 3:02 pm
Hey again,im so excited over this movie n the whole world practicly is aswell and i jus wanted to say something about Kristen,she is my all favourites in the movie MESSENGER shes awesome but shes better sticking with the #1 movie in the world is TWILIGHT thankz love you twilight cast mwawh =]
May 2nd, 2009 at 9:38 am
you did a great job of writting this script it even if it is unofficial i was nearly in tears when he suddenly left so quickly i felt her pain and with the true love thing jasper and alice well that is different but why not i mean if they can put bella n charlie in the eatery and its not in the book well i dont see how that wouldn t work so good luck and hope that they take it to account I really enjoyed that thanks again
May 2nd, 2009 at 10:25 am
Thanks bwawey and Shyphoe!
Thanks for being open rahnezmey.
May 6th, 2009 at 6:31 am
I began to cry as edward stated that he did not want her anymore and as her heart was ripped and yet she still felt passion and love for him aswell as he did for her… I also read the books and newmoon does not compare much to your version though i read your version three tomes it was incredeble iloved it thanks for taking your time to satsfiy us twilighters
May 6th, 2009 at 6:35 am
Again i apoligize for the improper gramar and spelling imeant to say time instead of tome and i also cried when i read the book alot i couldnt stop
May 7th, 2009 at 3:14 am
it was beatif eny it alot i love it srry icant write correct mouse is wear
May 13th, 2009 at 4:20 am
what jasper said was SOOOO SWEEET.its such a tear jerker
May 13th, 2009 at 4:57 am
very good but to be honest its different but a good different
May 17th, 2009 at 10:45 pm
i think it is ok it is very different from the book. there was a lot of stuff added like the play at her school. i will go and see the movie still but i dont know if i will be happy if this is the real script. i cant wait for the movie or just the first scene to come out.
May 19th, 2009 at 5:37 am
omg i think you should write the script this is such an amazing attempt i think you are a true movie genius…no bluff.
May 19th, 2009 at 9:14 am
I’ve always had a problem with the last fight scene in ‘Twilight’ because, even Jasper, with all his experience, couldn’t take on Edward with his mind reading ability, yet James was able to.
With Alice and Edward’s abilities combined, wouldn’t the Volturi have a hard time with them? Wouldn’t Alice been able to dodge the small vamps (like in New Moon with the newborns) or Edward see them coming (by reading someone’s mind that they were about to be unleashed)?
Just wondering. The script is very professional and I did enjoy this stronger version of Bella.
May 19th, 2009 at 9:40 am
Thanks, new author. I based the fact they were “beaten” on sheer number and more experienced group of fighters.
They definitely have an advantage, but, even with their abilities, the three of them cannot over power a whole group of “military” vampires who are used to fighting and eradicating experienced vampires, such as the wars over the vampire children that were mentioned in Breaking Dawn.
As Jasper also observes, newborns are easier to defeat because they are predictable. I’ve created a scenario wherein this is not the case.
Thanks again for reading the script!
May 24th, 2009 at 2:42 pm
that was pretty good..the only downside was the fact that you used some of the words from eclipse and the fact that Jacob wasnt suppose to kiss bella and the marrage stuff wasnt suppose to happen until elcipse… but still it was pretty good.
May 24th, 2009 at 10:32 pm
It’s cool
Eddie’s guilt in the end wasn’t just enough. I love when Ed feels so guilty and all. Dunno why.
May 24th, 2009 at 10:35 pm
Oh, and that marriage stuff doesn’t happen until Eclipse. Otherwise the script is good.
May 31st, 2009 at 12:27 am
1 word…W-O-W! Amazing job! Is this the real new moon script or just a made up one?
May 31st, 2009 at 2:48 am
Totally made up one, Twilight Fanpire.
June 1st, 2009 at 8:45 pm
Wow! YOu are genius! I love it! Good idea about having the New Moon flowers and how it means true love and forgiveness. I also love how when in Rom and Jul, Edward also says the bits about marriage. But doesn’t Edward propose to Bella in Eclipse? I adore your script. It is very very cool. It was good of you to have Bella take of the jacket so Jacob and the werewolves stay protected. I hope that the official script has some of your ideas!
I can’t wait to read your scripte for Eclipse and Breaking Dawn.
June 4th, 2009 at 10:43 pm
I think that it’s so cool how you came up with your own changes to the story. After a while, the original gets predictable but u added a twist to it. Thanx!
June 4th, 2009 at 11:18 pm
Thanks for appreciating the changes, Anatrk!
June 16th, 2009 at 3:28 am
love the whole thing, you have such a great imagination!
i love it especially the white and red tulips thing. maybe, like they did in the Twilight movie, they’ll add the tulips. because in the cafeteria, bella drops an apple and edward grabs it like in the front cover.
cant wait for New Moon on November 21!!!!
June 16th, 2009 at 3:36 am
response to- Twi-lover’s comment on edward’s marrige proposal in new moon/eclipse
well, yes, edward does propose to bella in eclipse, but if i may recall, in New Moon after the voting part happened, edward said
“If you could have anything in the world, anything at all, what would it be?”
bella says you then edward says something she doesnt have then bella says
“I wish it weren’t calisle that had to change me i wish it would be you.”
so then edward and bella begin to negotiate this and at last edward says
“Well, if you want me to be the one, you’ll have to meet my condition.”
“What condition?” bella asks
“Marry me first.”
and then bella thinks its a joke while she’s ‘wounding his ego’
so, get it?
i might not have done the conversation perfecty because i did it out of my head
June 16th, 2009 at 3:39 am
Thanks so much, Ismary1216 edward’s lvr!
June 18th, 2009 at 1:27 am
I think that you have some great ideas and that your script was brilliant.The only 2 things are that the marriage detail doesn’t really happen till eclipse and that the scimitars wouldn’t have been able to even scratch a vampire’s skin.
(The only thing that can tear a vampire’s skin is a vampire’s or werewolfs’s teeth.)
June 18th, 2009 at 5:01 am
That was great!! I loved the adding jasper . If the movie script is anything like that,it’ll be a great movie!!!
June 19th, 2009 at 4:50 am
This wasn’t the real script was it? I feeel super bad for reading it now…. lol
June 19th, 2009 at 4:55 am
No need to feel bad, Kelsey. It’s NOT the film script.
That is truly confidential!
June 21st, 2009 at 10:22 pm
very interesting adaptation on the book/movie…this must have taken you awhile to make up!
June 21st, 2009 at 10:44 pm
Thanks, Jen! Roughly it took me about six weeks to finish the New Moon script, if I remember correctly… Not too sure anymore… But there was a lot of conceptualizing and outlining before the actual writing… That took just as long if not longer…
June 26th, 2009 at 8:46 am
Hi,
I forgot to ask, but who the heck is Mark?
Wasnt jessica dating Mike? And then TONS of times it says someone named mark.
July 1st, 2009 at 11:29 am
WOW!!!!!! You have got TALENT!!! I’m going to TRY to drop links at popular websites to get people to look at this! And HOPEFULLY kristin,rob, or the director for new moon will see it and put your ideas into the movie!!!!!!!!
July 5th, 2009 at 5:13 pm
Wow that was brilliant, even better than the book in my opinion. You showed more Edward when he wasent with Bella which was fantastic and you get to see the realationship between Emmet and Rosalie. Truly you should right your own books becaus ethis was way more interesting and exciting.
Well Done,
There is definetly a carrer in writing for u!
Team Edwardxxxx
July 5th, 2009 at 5:41 pm
Thank you very much Team Edward!
July 8th, 2009 at 4:55 pm
Aw!
I think Edward & Bella should have kissed when it said “For never was a story of more woe
Than this of Juliet and her Romeo.”
:’]
July 20th, 2009 at 6:21 am
Love the script! It helps to calm the edge of waitting for the movie to be released. I read the other posts, and I don’t know if you’re aware, but a script of new moon was leacked on twitter and even though the site removed it, it was too little too late. I know of like 50 different pages where you can find the script. No one knows if it’s the real deal, but many, including me, believe it is because of it’s lenght and the fact that they tried to contain the leak as soon as they became aware of it.
July 20th, 2009 at 12:55 pm
Thank you, karim! Please keep the real script secret…
August 29th, 2009 at 2:31 am
This is all made up, most of the lines were just copied frm the book, and other were just made up! This is not even the real script! This is a lie! This is sooooo not the script for New Moon!! :@
August 30th, 2009 at 3:34 pm
Brilliant!! I loved it more than the book (my fav-mainly b/c of the wolves).I only didn’t want her to kiss Jacob b/c it changes the dynamic of book 3, otherwise it was awesome. Romantic & exciting. I loved that u had Victoria kill Harry Clearwater. It really allows the wolves involvement to be more appreciated. You are really talented. Hope your efforts get recognized by the right people.
August 30th, 2009 at 7:40 pm
Thank you very much for the appreciative words, Foxxx Talltrees!
September 12th, 2009 at 9:36 pm
That wuz effin awesome lorna!!!!!!!! You are a very talented writer who shuld write a book!!!!! Just fantatstic!!! I love how u have jasper go to Voltera to protect Alice!!!!!!! So sweet and cute!!
October 3rd, 2009 at 8:03 am
i loveed it i couldnt stop reading it was different, but a good different keep up the good work=] i hope you make more scripts i would be delighted to read them.
October 3rd, 2009 at 8:05 am
i loveed it i couldnt stop reading it was different, but a good different keep up the good work=] i hope you make more scripts i would be delighted to read them. thankz
October 12th, 2009 at 1:51 pm
This was amazing! I didn’t intend on reading the whole thing. I was just checking it out for a second…then I found myself reading every line, and I might add that you kept me at the edge of my seat!! Bravo!! Thank you so much for taking the time to post this. Keep up the good work
November 12th, 2009 at 3:52 am
Wow, this is really great. Better than original script. I love the idea of Jasper being in Volterra. It would be so perfect if this was the real screenplay… But still I am happy enough I´ve read it. I can always imagine it…
Thank you very much, this is really worth reading!
November 26th, 2009 at 12:01 pm
wow this is amazing…i was just wondering in another chanpter could you maybe put more of jacob in it (:
January 28th, 2010 at 11:47 am
Not bad, I believe your dialogue is actually better than the Twilight Movie dialogue. A little more grown up actually!
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