New Moon Unofficial Film Script — Romeo Must Not Die (Part 4)
SEQ. INT. Subterranean Crossroads. Edward slides Bella off his back and points her into one of the tunnels.
EDWARD
Bella, love, follow this tunnel to its very end. It will lead out of the city. No matter what happens, no matter what you see, hear, feel or sense, keep moving forward and get out of here.BELLA
No!EDWARD
Please, Bella. Please. Once you reach outside, call Carlisle.
Edward tucks a piece of paper into her jeans’ pocket.
EDWARD
He’ll arrange for you to get back to Forks. I promise that I’ll follow as soon as possible.BELLA
Edward…
Edward hugs her tightly, and then releases her to put the hood over her head and zip up Jacob’s jacket.
EDWARD
Make sure to wear this jacket. The Volturi do not know its scent. It will help hide your trail. Go!
Edward pushes her in the right direction. Bella looks back.
EDWARD
Go! Please, Bella! I promise that I’ll follow soon.
Bella reluctantly begins to half-run, stumbling a little, as she goes into the tunnel. Edward stares after her and then begins a false trail in another tunnel.
SEQ a. INT. Subterranean courtyard. Alice and Jasper are fighting a losing battle with the Volturi guard. Edward jumps in to join the fray. As soon as Demetri spots him, he signals Felix. The Volturi guards throw something to the backs of the three battling vampires, which turn out to be small vampires who cling tightly to Edward, Alice and Jasper while holding a scimitar (a curved sword that’s perfect for decapitation) to their necks. The three reluctantly cease fighting.
SEQ b. INT. Subterranean courtyard. Edward, Alice and Jasper are kneeling on the floor with bent heads, the scimitars held at the ready to their necks by the small Volturi guards. A blazing fire is burning nearby.
FELIX
Where’s the human female?
Felix sniffs the air.
FELIX
What have you done? I can’t trace her scent. Or hear her heartbeat.
Felix gestures to one of the Volturi guard, who throws to him another scimitar. Felix runs the tip threateningly over the fingers of Alice’s hand. Jasper and Edward growl. Alice throws them a look of caution.
FELIX
Seems such a waste to have a fire without something to burn in it. Do you like our scimitars? They can just rip your heads off, of course, but we’ve found it more civilized to use the scimitars.
Demetri raises his head, with an unusual frown on his face. He shakes his head to signal Felix he can’t find Bella, and to proceed to the next course of action.
FELIX
Aro wants to meet your little Bella.
Edward growls at him. The scimitar is immediately within a centimeter of his neck. Alice glares at Edward. Felix smiles at his reaction.
FELIX
Instead of searching for her, I think we have to persuade Bella to come to us. Now what could possibly convince her to accept our invitation? Something irresistible. (imitating Edward’s voice) Bella! Bella! Bella!
Felix goes around the courtyard shouting Bella’s name in Edward’s pleading voice, making sure the sound goes into all the tunnels.
SEQ. INT. Subterranean tunnel. Bella hears Edward calling her. She stops then determinedly continues forward. She sees a small light that indicates she’s near the exit. She moves faster towards the light, despite the calls of Edward.
SEQ. EXT. City Walls. Bella pushes the stone door and exits. She hurriedly removes Jacob’s jacket and stuffs it in some nearby bushes.
SEQ. INT. Subterranean courtyard. Felix can be heard shouting Bella’s name in Edward’s voice in nearby tunnels. Felix returns to the courtyard.
FELIX
It’s been an hour.
Demetri looks at him impassively.
FELIX
Bella! Bella!
They hear a sound. Demetri signals the Volturi guard. Within seconds, they return with Bella.
BELLA
I’m sorry, Edward.
SEQ. INT. Volturi Court. Bella, Edward, Alice and Jasper enter the well-lit court, flanked by the guard. Demetri offers his hand to Aro. Aro greets them even as he reads Demetri’s mind. Marcus and Caius are beside Aro.
ARO
Edward! We are so very pleased to welcome you back! And, of course, Alice and Jasper! And this must be the lovely Bella. Also on behalf of Marcus and Caius, I welcome you all to Volterra on St. Marcus Day!EDWARD
On behalf of my companions and myself, we thank you for your kind reception.ARO
Oh, forgive me. We haven’t been introduced properly at all, have we? It’s just that I feel like I know you already when I read Edward’s mind yesterday. Jasper, the mighty warrior who has survived thousands of vampire attacks. Fascinating Alice, who can see the things yet to come. And, the captivating Bella, the one exception to Edward’s impressive talent.
Aro focuses on Bella.
ARO
I was wondering, since our talents are similar, may I try to see if you are an exception for me as well? But my talent requires physical contact, so if you would be so kind as to raise your hand?
A terrified Bella looks at Edward for guidance, who nods slightly. Bella raises her hand as requested. Aro touches his hand to hers. His confidence changes to doubt, incredulity then a friendly mask.
ARO
A first. I wonder if she is immune to our other talents… Jane, dear?
A roar rips out from Edward. Jane beatifically smiles at him. Edward collapses and silently writhes in pain on the ground. Jasper and Bella make a slight movement towards Edward as if to help him. Alice grabs Bella by the shoulders to stop her. Jane smiles at Jasper. Jasper falls to the floor in pain, an occasional hiss escaping from his lips.
ARO
Alice, if you please…
Alice reluctantly releases Bella and takes a couple of steps away from her. Bella looks at the writhing figures, then raises her head to meet the gaze of Jane, prepared to be tortured as well. Jane smiles at Bella. But nothing happens. Jane increases the intensity of her efforts, glaring at Bella. Aro laughs delightedly and touches Jane on the shoulder.
ARO
Don’t be put out, dear one. She confounds us all. Cease and be at peace.
Edward and Jasper spring lithely to their feet, and, together with Alice, form a circle around Bella. Marcus touches Aro’s palm briefly.
ARO
(to Marcus) Thank you.
Marcus moves away towards the windows.
ARO
(to Edward and company) Marcus is surprised at the intensity of your family’s ties with one another. (to Alice) Your brother seems to think you infallible, but, apparently, there was some mistake.ALICE
Oh, I’m far from infallible. As you can see today, I cause problems as often as I cure them.ARO
You’re too modest. I’ve seen some of your more amazing exploits, and I must admit I’ve never seen anything like your talent. Wonderful! (to Edward) You see, Edward? What did I tell you? Aren’t you glad that I didn’t give you what you wanted yesterday?EDWARD
Yes, Aro, I am.ARO
I adore a happy ending. They are so rare. Ah, the bliss of true love. And the tragedy of its loss.
Aro glances briefly at Marcus then turns his gaze back to Edward and company.
ARO
My young friends, we are in a quandary. You have broken our most basic of laws by telling Bella of our secret existence.
Edward tries to speak, but, Aro raises his hand.
ARO
But, let it not be said that the Volturi are not merciful. Alec, leave their sight and hearing.
Alec looks in the direction of Edward and Jasper. A mist travels from him and surrounds the two male vampires.
EDWARD
No!ARO
We, Marcus, Caius and I, will spare all of you. But we claim Bella. Only her life will be forfeit.
With Alec’s mist, Edward and Jasper are incapacitated. They cannot move nor speak. However, their sight and hearing are intact, and they are still aware of the proceedings. Aro beckons to Bella to come closer to him. Bella is forced by the Volturi guards to move forward.
ARO
I’m so curious, you see. Edward, do you know that we have a name for her? La Tua Cantante. Her blood sings for you. Just remembering the siren call of her blood through your memories makes me thirsty.
Aro sniffs delicately.
ARO
Ah– The bouquet is tantalizing.
Aro lowers his head towards Bella’s neck.
ARO
I shall sip her like a fine wine.
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January 22nd, 2009 at 2:48 am
Well done! It will be fun to compare your’s to the finished product. I think it’s an interesting treatment as a whole. I can’t complain about having more Jasper. Did I miss Victoria in the end with the exception of E and J alluding to her? I need to go back and read again.
I heard tales of a late rewrite by Melissa. May be she’s seen this one, eh? LOL…
I’ve linked in my blog like the other parts–links only.
January 22nd, 2009 at 7:17 am
Thanks, Shannon! I love the Alice — Jasper tandem, and I also gave emphasis to the Rosalie — Emmett union for the true love theme.
Re Victoria, she ran off when she heard Jacob coming up the cliffs, but, when she caught the unexpected scent of Alice, she decided to cut her losses for the moment. So, yes, she’s only mentioned by Edward and Jasper in the end.
Thanks for the links!
January 29th, 2009 at 2:21 am
This is wonderful! I started reading it when you only had one part up on the web and I came back and read the finished script. This is great and I like how you added some parts, that weren’t necessarily written in the book, to enhance some of the characters bonds. Well done!
January 29th, 2009 at 2:45 am
Wow! That’s a lot of reading, Amanda. Thanks for coming back and checking out the rest of the script. Thanks for appreciating the new scenes, and thank you for the kind words.
January 29th, 2009 at 8:41 am
cute script!!! totally enjoyed watching it. i hope that the movie is similar to yours! =)
i hope you do eclipse and breaking dawn…
January 29th, 2009 at 10:01 am
Thanks, Sheryll. I just finished reading Eclipse again in preparation to writing the script. I’ll finish till Breaking Dawn.
No promises as to when though. Thanks for understanding. 
February 3rd, 2009 at 4:51 am
You know where I can get the official script for New Moon?
February 3rd, 2009 at 6:29 am
Please, I want this so much.
Thanks
February 3rd, 2009 at 7:33 am
Hi Joanna. I’m sorry but I have no access to the Melissa Rosenberg script. And, I think someone would lose his job if that script ever got leaked out. Thanks for understanding.
February 3rd, 2009 at 8:01 am
ahhh, it’s ok
thanks anyway
February 3rd, 2009 at 8:06 am
But you have some idea if it will look like yours?
Sorry for being hamper
February 3rd, 2009 at 8:29 am
Hi Joanna. Let me just clarify that, as stated above, “The Twilight saga is owned and created by Stephenie Meyer, Little, Brown and Company and Summit Entertainment. This site and its content are in no way affiliated or associated with and/or or it’s respective companies.”
Having said that, let me just share a couple of facts. In a recent Melissa Rosenberg interview, she has said, “But at the moment, the part of Leah doesn’t happen until the third movie.”
Leah Clearwater appears in this unofficial script.
Aside from that, I’m sure there are more differences. Like, I’m guessing that since Jackson Rathbone, who plays Jasper, is shooting The Last Airbender this year, he’s probably not included in the Volturi scenes, but, he is in this unofficial version.
My guess is the similarity will be the device to bring Edward as a visual instead of an audio hallucination.
One of my objectives in writing the script is expanding the mind set of the Twilighters regarding the realm of possibilities that can be done for the film medium. Thanks for understanding.
February 4th, 2009 at 7:41 am
Thank you
February 8th, 2009 at 11:56 am
That was sooooo good (I cried a little), some of my favorite parts were cut out but you did a good job. Thanks!
February 8th, 2009 at 11:29 pm
Oh, I’m sorry you cried, but, I’m also glad you got affected. Thanks so much for reading the script!
February 10th, 2009 at 5:41 am
this script is not like the book at all. i dont like it
February 10th, 2009 at 12:55 pm
Yes, it is not like the book at all. As I wrote in my notes above:
This script version is my attempt to reconcile the literary world with the more visual medium of film. Just like in the Lord of the Rings, changes will be made to accommodate a driven story line, time constraints, and attention to character development.
Although this script is based on the Twilight saga, it will be faithful to the spirit of the books, but, not necessarily be faithful in every way as to how it’s presented in the books per se.
Thank you for reading.
February 13th, 2009 at 1:49 am
its so good i watched twilight a lot but the sixth part …it’s so sad
February 19th, 2009 at 10:09 am
i think Rob should pull some strings and get his sis lizzy pattinson on the soundtrack for her song — cold as ice—- listen to it on her myspace page , its pretty good.
February 19th, 2009 at 9:26 pm
Hi Melissa. That sounds cool. Can you please go to this post:
Request for a Robert Pattinson — Kristen Stewart Duet in the New Moon Soundtrack
And then can you please leave a link to the MySpace site of Lizzy Pattinson ?
Thanks!
April 6th, 2009 at 5:20 am
i like it but the ONE i didn’T like is The kiss with jacob cause she DIDN’T kiss him at all!
this script is good but i hate the kissing with jacob!
April 11th, 2009 at 10:16 am
she actually does kiss him just not in the second book O_o i think it adds some flavor… it’s funny when alice comes back and is like “JESUS CHRIST BELLA LETS GOOOO!” or something along that tenor of thought ;]
April 11th, 2009 at 10:22 am
Thanks for appreciating the changes, Kendall!
April 16th, 2009 at 11:06 pm
wow!superb!i haven’t read the books yet coz am waiting for RPatzz and KStew to become a couple before i’ll read the books.he,he(lol) but i really love what you are writing here.it’s great!more!more!
April 24th, 2009 at 2:46 pm
Hey,i loved that script i always day dreamed that they will always get to the part were they get married(Edward and Bella)i must thank JESUS,
Oh well i love you guys yous rock my heart every step of the way cant wait for the movie to come out love yous guys
April 24th, 2009 at 3:02 pm
Hey again,im so excited over this movie n the whole world practicly is aswell and i jus wanted to say something about Kristen,she is my all favourites in the movie MESSENGER shes awesome but shes better sticking with the #1 movie in the world is TWILIGHT thankz love you twilight cast mwawh =]
May 2nd, 2009 at 9:38 am
you did a great job of writting this script it even if it is unofficial i was nearly in tears when he suddenly left so quickly i felt her pain and with the true love thing jasper and alice well that is different but why not i mean if they can put bella n charlie in the eatery and its not in the book well i dont see how that wouldn t work so good luck and hope that they take it to account I really enjoyed that thanks again
May 2nd, 2009 at 10:25 am
Thanks bwawey and Shyphoe!
Thanks for being open rahnezmey.
May 6th, 2009 at 6:31 am
I began to cry as edward stated that he did not want her anymore and as her heart was ripped and yet she still felt passion and love for him aswell as he did for her… I also read the books and newmoon does not compare much to your version though i read your version three tomes it was incredeble iloved it thanks for taking your time to satsfiy us twilighters
May 6th, 2009 at 6:35 am
Again i apoligize for the improper gramar and spelling imeant to say time instead of tome and i also cried when i read the book alot i couldnt stop
May 7th, 2009 at 3:14 am
it was beatif eny it alot i love it srry icant write correct mouse is wear
May 13th, 2009 at 4:20 am
what jasper said was SOOOO SWEEET.its such a tear jerker
May 13th, 2009 at 4:57 am
very good but to be honest its different but a good different
May 17th, 2009 at 10:45 pm
i think it is ok it is very different from the book. there was a lot of stuff added like the play at her school. i will go and see the movie still but i dont know if i will be happy if this is the real script. i cant wait for the movie or just the first scene to come out.
May 19th, 2009 at 5:37 am
omg i think you should write the script this is such an amazing attempt i think you are a true movie genius…no bluff.
May 19th, 2009 at 9:14 am
I’ve always had a problem with the last fight scene in ‘Twilight’ because, even Jasper, with all his experience, couldn’t take on Edward with his mind reading ability, yet James was able to.
With Alice and Edward’s abilities combined, wouldn’t the Volturi have a hard time with them? Wouldn’t Alice been able to dodge the small vamps (like in New Moon with the newborns) or Edward see them coming (by reading someone’s mind that they were about to be unleashed)?
Just wondering. The script is very professional and I did enjoy this stronger version of Bella.
May 19th, 2009 at 9:40 am
Thanks, new author. I based the fact they were “beaten” on sheer number and more experienced group of fighters.
They definitely have an advantage, but, even with their abilities, the three of them cannot over power a whole group of “military” vampires who are used to fighting and eradicating experienced vampires, such as the wars over the vampire children that were mentioned in Breaking Dawn.
As Jasper also observes, newborns are easier to defeat because they are predictable. I’ve created a scenario wherein this is not the case.
Thanks again for reading the script!
May 24th, 2009 at 2:42 pm
that was pretty good..the only downside was the fact that you used some of the words from eclipse and the fact that Jacob wasnt suppose to kiss bella and the marrage stuff wasnt suppose to happen until elcipse… but still it was pretty good.
May 24th, 2009 at 10:32 pm
It’s cool
Eddie’s guilt in the end wasn’t just enough. I love when Ed feels so guilty and all. Dunno why.
May 24th, 2009 at 10:35 pm
Oh, and that marriage stuff doesn’t happen until Eclipse. Otherwise the script is good.
May 31st, 2009 at 12:27 am
1 word…W-O-W! Amazing job! Is this the real new moon script or just a made up one?
May 31st, 2009 at 2:48 am
Totally made up one, Twilight Fanpire.
June 1st, 2009 at 8:45 pm
Wow! YOu are genius! I love it! Good idea about having the New Moon flowers and how it means true love and forgiveness. I also love how when in Rom and Jul, Edward also says the bits about marriage. But doesn’t Edward propose to Bella in Eclipse? I adore your script. It is very very cool. It was good of you to have Bella take of the jacket so Jacob and the werewolves stay protected. I hope that the official script has some of your ideas!
I can’t wait to read your scripte for Eclipse and Breaking Dawn.
June 4th, 2009 at 10:43 pm
I think that it’s so cool how you came up with your own changes to the story. After a while, the original gets predictable but u added a twist to it. Thanx!
June 4th, 2009 at 11:18 pm
Thanks for appreciating the changes, Anatrk!
June 16th, 2009 at 3:28 am
love the whole thing, you have such a great imagination!
i love it especially the white and red tulips thing. maybe, like they did in the Twilight movie, they’ll add the tulips. because in the cafeteria, bella drops an apple and edward grabs it like in the front cover.
cant wait for New Moon on November 21!!!!
June 16th, 2009 at 3:36 am
response to- Twi-lover’s comment on edward’s marrige proposal in new moon/eclipse
well, yes, edward does propose to bella in eclipse, but if i may recall, in New Moon after the voting part happened, edward said
“If you could have anything in the world, anything at all, what would it be?”
bella says you then edward says something she doesnt have then bella says
“I wish it weren’t calisle that had to change me i wish it would be you.”
so then edward and bella begin to negotiate this and at last edward says
“Well, if you want me to be the one, you’ll have to meet my condition.”
“What condition?” bella asks
“Marry me first.”
and then bella thinks its a joke while she’s ‘wounding his ego’
so, get it?
i might not have done the conversation perfecty because i did it out of my head
June 16th, 2009 at 3:39 am
Thanks so much, Ismary1216 edward’s lvr!
June 18th, 2009 at 1:27 am
I think that you have some great ideas and that your script was brilliant.The only 2 things are that the marriage detail doesn’t really happen till eclipse and that the scimitars wouldn’t have been able to even scratch a vampire’s skin.
(The only thing that can tear a vampire’s skin is a vampire’s or werewolfs’s teeth.)
June 18th, 2009 at 5:01 am
That was great!! I loved the adding jasper . If the movie script is anything like that,it’ll be a great movie!!!
June 19th, 2009 at 4:50 am
This wasn’t the real script was it? I feeel super bad for reading it now…. lol
June 19th, 2009 at 4:55 am
No need to feel bad, Kelsey. It’s NOT the film script.
That is truly confidential!
June 21st, 2009 at 10:22 pm
very interesting adaptation on the book/movie…this must have taken you awhile to make up!
June 21st, 2009 at 10:44 pm
Thanks, Jen! Roughly it took me about six weeks to finish the New Moon script, if I remember correctly… Not too sure anymore… But there was a lot of conceptualizing and outlining before the actual writing… That took just as long if not longer…
June 26th, 2009 at 8:46 am
Hi,
I forgot to ask, but who the heck is Mark?
Wasnt jessica dating Mike? And then TONS of times it says someone named mark.
July 1st, 2009 at 11:29 am
WOW!!!!!! You have got TALENT!!! I’m going to TRY to drop links at popular websites to get people to look at this! And HOPEFULLY kristin,rob, or the director for new moon will see it and put your ideas into the movie!!!!!!!!
July 5th, 2009 at 5:13 pm
Wow that was brilliant, even better than the book in my opinion. You showed more Edward when he wasent with Bella which was fantastic and you get to see the realationship between Emmet and Rosalie. Truly you should right your own books becaus ethis was way more interesting and exciting.
Well Done,
There is definetly a carrer in writing for u!
Team Edwardxxxx
July 5th, 2009 at 5:41 pm
Thank you very much Team Edward!
July 8th, 2009 at 4:55 pm
Aw!
I think Edward & Bella should have kissed when it said “For never was a story of more woe
Than this of Juliet and her Romeo.”
:’]
July 20th, 2009 at 6:21 am
Love the script! It helps to calm the edge of waitting for the movie to be released. I read the other posts, and I don’t know if you’re aware, but a script of new moon was leacked on twitter and even though the site removed it, it was too little too late. I know of like 50 different pages where you can find the script. No one knows if it’s the real deal, but many, including me, believe it is because of it’s lenght and the fact that they tried to contain the leak as soon as they became aware of it.
July 20th, 2009 at 12:55 pm
Thank you, karim! Please keep the real script secret…
August 29th, 2009 at 2:31 am
This is all made up, most of the lines were just copied frm the book, and other were just made up! This is not even the real script! This is a lie! This is sooooo not the script for New Moon!! :@
August 30th, 2009 at 3:34 pm
Brilliant!! I loved it more than the book (my fav-mainly b/c of the wolves).I only didn’t want her to kiss Jacob b/c it changes the dynamic of book 3, otherwise it was awesome. Romantic & exciting. I loved that u had Victoria kill Harry Clearwater. It really allows the wolves involvement to be more appreciated. You are really talented. Hope your efforts get recognized by the right people.
August 30th, 2009 at 7:40 pm
Thank you very much for the appreciative words, Foxxx Talltrees!
September 12th, 2009 at 9:36 pm
That wuz effin awesome lorna!!!!!!!! You are a very talented writer who shuld write a book!!!!! Just fantatstic!!! I love how u have jasper go to Voltera to protect Alice!!!!!!! So sweet and cute!!
October 3rd, 2009 at 8:03 am
i loveed it i couldnt stop reading it was different, but a good different keep up the good work=] i hope you make more scripts i would be delighted to read them.
October 3rd, 2009 at 8:05 am
i loveed it i couldnt stop reading it was different, but a good different keep up the good work=] i hope you make more scripts i would be delighted to read them. thankz
October 12th, 2009 at 1:51 pm
This was amazing! I didn’t intend on reading the whole thing. I was just checking it out for a second…then I found myself reading every line, and I might add that you kept me at the edge of my seat!! Bravo!! Thank you so much for taking the time to post this. Keep up the good work
November 12th, 2009 at 3:52 am
Wow, this is really great. Better than original script. I love the idea of Jasper being in Volterra. It would be so perfect if this was the real screenplay… But still I am happy enough I´ve read it. I can always imagine it…
Thank you very much, this is really worth reading!
November 26th, 2009 at 12:01 pm
wow this is amazing…i was just wondering in another chanpter could you maybe put more of jacob in it (:
January 28th, 2010 at 11:47 am
Not bad, I believe your dialogue is actually better than the Twilight Movie dialogue. A little more grown up actually!
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