Comments on: New Moon Unofficial Film Script — Close to Home (Part 3)

By: Carroll B. Merriman

Carroll B. Merriman — Sat, 08 Jan 2011 04:12:16 +0000

The Twilight film is the nonpareil! The continuous battle amongst the vampires and werewolves makes it baffling to figure which faction to rise to. I've gathered all about the quileute legends. Twilight kindles excitement within me with these distorted tales.

By: isabella

isabella — Sun, 11 Oct 2009 19:05:42 +0000

So fake but goodbut fake

By: sheen

sheen — Thu, 20 Aug 2009 08:13:05 +0000

Can somebody tell me where Edward is?

By: twilight fan

twilight fan — Tue, 14 Jul 2009 23:12:29 +0000

I dont think she would break the cd in half or rip the photos because she really misses him

By: Edward Obsessed

Edward Obsessed — Fri, 26 Jun 2009 00:33:12 +0000

Hi,
Okay, At first i really liked the script and i am still in love with the ending, dont get me wrong. But i really dont like the kissing part between jacob and bella becuse, like many people said, It doesnt happen till somewhere in the middle of the 3rd book. I also am very confused cause outta nowhere there is this Tori chic. Who the Heck? I already knew who it was but it totally changes her original reason for jumping off. Just For Fun. But it is very good with the fact it isnt real and the fact it was for fun. Ask Stephanie meyer, You can find a great cereer ( spellin?)by doing something just for fun.I like the factr that yo used some of the quotes from the book, but i have read the book a countless number of times and some things dont make sense. I ♥♥♥♥♥♥ the ending. it is soooo sweet. I am a Hopless romantic, and it is jus so sweet. I almost started crying happy tears. but what it boils down to is great job, just very confusing, and i ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ the ENDING. JUST BEAUTIFUL!!! Masterpeice.

By: mrs.cullen black

mrs.cullen black — Tue, 16 Jun 2009 23:16:35 +0000

have a great summer!!!love mrs.cullen black

By: mrs.cullen black

mrs.cullen black — Tue, 16 Jun 2009 23:15:11 +0000

anyway soo just to let everbody know i dnt like these scripts!!!!”i mean u cant always have it like the book” but that new director is keeping it as close to the book a possible!!!!!i know it cant be the same but at least have some of the stuff!!!!!

By: bibo

bibo — Tue, 16 Jun 2009 23:11:21 +0000

hehe…

By: Mrs. Edward Cullen to be

Mrs. Edward Cullen to be — Thu, 11 Jun 2009 05:15:48 +0000

omigaaad!
i love every single part
EXCEPT
the part where bella and [the] d-g KISSS!!!!!!!
ARGH!!!!!!

By: twilight

twilight — Sat, 06 Jun 2009 23:55:02 +0000

Thanks so much, Nessie Cullen! The plan is to write until Breaking Dawn. I don’t exactly when though. Thanks again for reading!

By: Nessie Cullen

Nessie Cullen — Sat, 06 Jun 2009 16:35:56 +0000

OMG!!!!!!!! This is an ahhh-mayy-zinnnggg script. I’m so happy i found it? Will there be any more postings?

By: twilight

twilight — Fri, 15 May 2009 13:06:04 +0000

Hi Bobby. When you reach the end of the script, I have notes that will say Edward is not really there but just a figment of Bella’s subconscious. However, the audience will be left guessing if he’s really there or not. The ‘real’ Edward is usually alone or with another Cullen.

And, yes, definitely there will be a screen shot of the wound healing, where to put it exactly is at the discretion of the director and editor.

By: Bobby

Bobby — Fri, 15 May 2009 06:44:04 +0000

ok so now i’m sorta lost. when it says that edwards their, he’s not really, is he? also when it’s talking abot the wolves healing, instead of them saying have like a screenshot showing Sam’s wound healing.

By: twilight

twilight — Tue, 12 May 2009 23:12:15 +0000

Thanks for the heads up, Emily Cullen. It’s Mike. Typo error on my part. Edited it. Thanks again!

By: Emily Cullen

Emily Cullen — Tue, 12 May 2009 23:04:32 +0000

O and was mark a new character or a mistake on mike? or am i just forgetting someone?

By: Emily Cullen

Emily Cullen — Tue, 12 May 2009 22:57:45 +0000

I like this alot! One thing I would change is how formal it all sounds… the conversations should flow a bit better like when Jacob says “I discovered last year they were all too true. When I reached manhood, I turned into a werewolf. Werewolves only exist because vampires do.” It sounds like he is a different person than Jake… And Bella’s line “You mean the presence of vampires brings out the wolves in your tribe?” Sounds like she is too informed already… Other than that its fantastic! (sorry if you think im to critcal… i know i never could do this well… just pointers…). Thanks for the entertainment:)-Emily

By: destiny

destiny — Sat, 09 May 2009 17:27:51 +0000

Your script is good, but I truly hope this is not how the movie will play out, you have changed so many important parts, that are in the book, which is what inspired the movie to be made… You have forgotten to add certain people, and your all wrong with Seth and Leah…It’s all wrong, I am sorry to be the hateful one here, but I am sure changing so many things will make for a lot of unhappy Twilight Saga fans.

By: Mikaele and Brooke

Mikaele and Brooke — Thu, 07 May 2009 23:59:33 +0000

YAY i hope its betta than the 1st one but robert pattinson is still cute LOL

By: daisy

daisy — Thu, 07 May 2009 03:13:46 +0000

omgomgomg
he kisses her? what
omgomgomg
my heart just skipped a beat
[team jacobbb]

By: Mercedes

Mercedes — Tue, 05 May 2009 00:45:48 +0000

Im sorry but this is so not like the book in some ways its better but over all i truely think it could be btter if you made it more like the book.Idk maybe i will have to see it done and put together.I do like the fact you did put edward in most of it that is great but when you change alot of it, it loses the way we would see it in our heads as we read it. I think when edward tells bella goodbye it was great the way stephenie wrote it chaning it just loses the sadness bella has.

By: edwardbemine08

edwardbemine08 — Mon, 20 Apr 2009 05:12:56 +0000

ok so, i love that someone like you is actually out there, and who will spend so much time on something like this to help twilight fans with the addiction. so the first thing i want to say is thank you! now my comments =) i understand that the book is going to have to be modified somewhat because it needs to be visual, but i think it’s possible to keep some scenes more loyal to the book (i.e.- scene with jacob in her bedroom, or when bella supposed to WANT to save edward) Also, i think that the tori idea was definitely creative, but i don’t think it’s necessary- she hunts bella vigorously in the third, so that would be too much. Besideds, the whole tori thing takes away the real reason why bella jumps. it has to be about seeing edward through adrenaline, not victoria-induced. Anyhoo, i could probably write another five pages, and alot of it would be god comments too =) you really do have a talent, twilight. keep up the good work, and thanks again!

By: Sara

Sara — Thu, 16 Apr 2009 17:11:35 +0000

SOOOOOO GOOD!!!

By: teamjacob

teamjacob — Wed, 15 Apr 2009 23:58:51 +0000

i dont think that this script is very well done. It doesnt follow the book at all. But either way its not the real script, thats for a fact.

By: twilight babe

twilight babe — Sun, 12 Apr 2009 04:09:10 +0000

im just confused right now!!! i mean i cant wait til this movie comes out!!! im skipping part of my school day just to see the movie at midnight!! and i hope that one of the twilight hotties(talkin bout the guys) will read this and be like whoa, this is really good and use some of your script!!!that would be so cool!!!then i would know the lines!!!but yeah i do understand that it cant be all about the book!!!you have to have new stuff in the movie!! but the girl who actually wrote the script sucks!!in the first movie she left out a good part!!!and then i read this and im astonished!!!you are waaaaayyyy better the her!!! you didnt miss almost one thing!!!i gotta a ?,are you gonna write scripts for eclipse and breaking dawn!!!?????

By: twilight

twilight — Sun, 12 Apr 2009 03:30:21 +0000

Twilight babe, you need to remember that the film medium is a VISUAL one while a book is a literary one. Film scripts must tell the story differently so one cannot expect the details, for example as to when the kiss should be, to be strictly followed. You may want to read my notes again on page 7 so you’ll understand my intentions. Thank you very much.